Personalization is a trap
Do this instead:

Hey Niepodam,

The other day, I saw a rep personalize 5 emails in a row. Took 20 minutes per lead.

Each one started with something like: “Saw you went to Michigan, go Wolverines!”

Or: “Loved your post on hiring culture.”

And then? The same generic pitch right after.

No replies.

Here’s the harsh truth: Personalization isn’t the move anymore.

Buyers have seen it all. They know when you’re just stitching together a LinkedIn scan with a template.

Worse, it’s a bait-and-switch: “Hey, let me make this about you... Just kidding, here’s my pitch.”

We replaced that entire playbook with something better:

Point of View > Personalization

We taught the rep to stop referencing people, and start referencing problems.
Not who the buyer is, but what they’re likely struggling with.

Every email led with a sharp, relevant POV about:

– Where their onboarding breaks
– Why their demo conversion lags
– How their CS team’s drowning in handoffs

No flattery. No fake familiarity. Just a compelling, uncomfortable truth they couldn’t unsee.

Buyers didn’t just open, they replied.
Because we spoke to their reality, not their résumé.

Here’s what that looks like in practice (idea-wise):

Industry POV

Open with a trend or shift that’s disrupting their category. Make them question their current path.

Problem Framing

Highlight a mistake 80% of teams make, and the fallout that comes with it. Make it hit home.

Tension Mirror

Describe their world so accurately they feel seen, and exposed. Then offer a way out.

Bottom line:

✅ Real insight earns trust
❌ Flattery gets ghosted

Don’t write emails like a fan. Write like someone who knows something they need to hear.

Alan "Modern Seller" Ruchtein.

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