I checked on that earlier and I think keeping the plan simple will help more than adding extra steps.
If the schedule feels crowded, I would move the task that needs the clearest head to the morning and leave the less demanding part for later.
I usually make a short list with only three things so I can actually finish it instead of staring at something too long.
Also, if you're unsure about timing, give yourself a real stopping point and reassess then.
I have found that even a brief walk or a glass of water can reset my focus when I start drifting.
If you want, send over the draft again and I can look at the wording tonight.
I am not promising perfection, but I can definitely tell you what feels clear and what still sounds tangled.
That probably gets you farther than waiting for the ideal moment.

I tried the simpler version first, and honestly it worked better because there were fewer things to track at once.
When I pile too much into one afternoon, I end up switching between tasks and getting annoyed with all of them.
So now I start with the one thing I can finish in a single sitting, then I take a quick break before doing the next piece.
If you are deciding whether to redo the whole thing, I would not unless there is a real issue with the structure.
Tightening a few lines and trimming the parts that wander might be enough.
I can review it again tomorrow if that helps.
I am usually better at spotting awkward phrasing after stepping away for a bit.
Send the newest version when you're ready, and if I do not answer immediately, I will still get back to it as soon as I can.